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28 July 2010 @ 12:40 pm
Trek Fic: It Was So Kind Of You To Come (Pike/McCoy, NC-17)  
Title: It Was So Kind of You To Come (Part 34 of To Talk of Many Things)
Authors: mga1999 and skyblue_reverie
Fandom & Pairing: Star Trek Reboot (aka AOS, ST XI, etc.), Pike/McCoy
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None
Word Count: Around 7000
Summary: The correspondence and personal journals of Christopher Pike and Leonard McCoy. Now with bonus Jim!
A/N: Um, enjoy? /braindead and boring


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Dear Jim, You crazy jackass.Collapse )

On to Part 35
 
 
 
random00brandom00b on July 29th, 2010 06:34 pm (UTC)
Great chapter!
I continue to commend both of you of the realism of Pike & McCoy's relationships--the ups and downs, the days when neither one really wants sex but goes through the motions anyway, the jealousy that will always rear its head at some point when you love someone that much.

I do fear for their relationship because, even if they plan to spend the next 60-70 years together, the greater part of 9 years spent light years apart (especially in the early part of a relationship) is ALOT of strain. I've seen marriages suffer under the strain of just a few weeks or months of separation, marriages that had 10+, 15+ years on them.

One more thing: I continue to believe that Len is so convinced of Jim's need for him (and vice versa) that he'd give up his lover if forced to choose. And that's such a heart-breaking thing for me. Epic friendship is epic; epic love, even more so.

Edited at 2010-07-29 06:35 pm (UTC)
Jude: st - pike/mccoymga1999 on July 30th, 2010 03:15 am (UTC)
Re: Great chapter!
Thank you! I think we've both worked hard to make everything as realistic as possible. It's what makes it so enjoyable to write for me.

I try to think of their being apart, their relationship, not any different than all the others that serve on starships or space stations where their loved ones are back on earth or somewhere else. It's the Starfleet way of life. Realistically, Chris and Len wouldn't see each other as often as they have. We've just taken liberty with that for our selfish purpose. Chris being lifetime Starfleet, is more used to it than Len, but he get's it.

As far as Len and Jim, this is what my thoughts have always been. If it ever came to a point where Chris forced Len to choose, it wouldn't have anything to do with how much he loves Chris, or his loyalty to Jim. What you have to think about is, would you want to be with someone, marry someone and spend your life with them if they made you make that choice?

imacharimachar on August 2nd, 2010 09:02 pm (UTC)
Re: Great chapter!
I almost never jump in in the middle of a conversation but here I go - I guess my thought is though, what if Chris doesn't make him choose - what if life makes him choose? It's a hell of a thing to live with the idea that if your partner was forced to choose between you and his best friend you'd lose...even in an entirely imaginary "what if we were both drowning" kind of way...it's bound to be a little disconcerting (at best).

Loved the chapter as always, great to have to have the sex back on track after the entirely realistic failure...

I find these kinds of separations entirely normal, my parents spent 40 years with one of them circling the globe on freighters...some relationships work just fine that way, even though it's hard.

fanarts_series: Bonesfanarts_series on July 29th, 2010 10:37 pm (UTC)
It's excellent, the live in the starfleet command is not a way of roses.
I love the caring for Jim even if Chris is a bit jealous, the boy needs them so much with the assholes around them.

Can't wait for more.
Jude: st - pike/mccoymga1999 on July 30th, 2010 03:18 am (UTC)
Thank you! The life of a Starfleet officer or any Starfleet member for that matter isn't easy.

Jim does need to know he has people who care about him. Chris never really stopped caring, he was just blinded by that horrible jealousy.

drinking rum and writing some: karl long hairtherumjournals on July 29th, 2010 11:07 pm (UTC)
I guess it's just that ever since you told me about your talk with Old Spock, and how he told you that you and him, or the other him, this universe's him, were destined to be the most epic friends of all time and people would write goddamn songs about you or something - ha ha! so epic!

the sex was hot and the end was saaaaaaaaaaad :-(
Jude: st - pike/mccoymga1999 on July 30th, 2010 03:47 am (UTC)
Wasn't that a great line that my co-writer wrote? It cracked me up every time I read it.

Hot sex. Check.
Angst. Check.

Seems like a typical section for us. *g*
a particularly troubled Romulan: st:xispocklookingupillariy on July 29th, 2010 11:35 pm (UTC)
Oh man, it's great to see Jim and Len growing a lot as people, and Pike, too. *hugs everyone* *is relieved* *and looking forward to future developments*
Jude: st - pike/mccoymga1999 on July 30th, 2010 03:50 am (UTC)
It is nice to see them growing and growing up. Of course for us, we're like, waaaaaiiiiiitttt. We're not ready yet.

Lots of fun stuff coming up. We had a really evol good plotting session last night for the next arc.

Thank you!
(Anonymous) on July 30th, 2010 03:00 am (UTC)
Thanks for another great chapter!
Love the vulnerability Chris shows and how determined he is to improve the situation with Jim.

Am so enjoying this series...please, please, please keep writing!
Jude: st - pike/mccoymga1999 on July 30th, 2010 04:11 am (UTC)
Re: Thanks for another great chapter!
Thank you! We are writing away as I type this, don't worry. :D
kelpietreekelpietree on July 30th, 2010 05:37 am (UTC)
oh the separation is so painful.
Jude: st - pike/mccoymga1999 on July 31st, 2010 04:32 am (UTC)
Yes, but luckily not as long this time. Thank you!
Madeleine Urbanmadeleineurban on July 30th, 2010 08:17 am (UTC)
<3
Jude: st - pike/mccoymga1999 on July 31st, 2010 04:32 am (UTC)
Thank you! <3