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30 July 2006 @ 03:20 pm
Jeeves and the Serious Consequences  
Hallo, old things!

Here's my next fic, I hope you all enjoy!

I'm trying to decide whether, for my next piece, I want to do a Jeeves POV on these same events, or whether I should just move on to something else. If you leave a comment (which, ohpleaseyesplease!) feel free to let me know which you'd prefer. Also, if you've got any spare J/W bunnies lying about, please feel free to lob them my way - I'm open to suggestions (although I make no promises)!

Cross-posted to my lj, indeedsir and fryandorlaurie


Title: Jeeves and the Serious Consequences (since the obvious title was already taken *g*)
Author: Sky Blue Reverie skyblue_reverie
Fandom: Jeeves and Wooster
Pairing: J/W
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: Approximately 10,500
Summary: A sequel to my first fic, The Matter of Mr Wooster's Headaches. A Bertie POV this time, featuring Aunt Agatha and Stiffy Byng and kinky tie bondage, oh my. (Er, but the bondage does not involve Aunt A. or Stiffy. *shudder*)
Disclaimer: Still not mine.
Author’s Notes: Inspired once again by the fics of and conversations with the utterly fantabulous veronamay, beta’d by the corking weaselwoman13 and the aforementioned u.f. veronamay. Thank you so much, darlings! *mwah*
Feedback: Will be treasured and responded to with embarrassing enthusiasm.

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Omphale: J/W true lovedryadwoman on July 31st, 2006 10:59 pm (UTC)
My current state is that of a puddle of liquid on the floor, I don't mind telling you.

That was truly epic, brilliant, genius, first-rate, &c. Loved the richness of detail, the Wuthering Heights references. Your Bertie voice is spot on, even during the (incredibly hot) sex. And the bit at the end about the belt was my undoing. I am such a bondage!fic whore.

*worships you, &c.*
Skyskyblue_reverie on July 31st, 2006 11:45 pm (UTC)
Yay! I melted you! *mops you up, sticks you in a bucket and bungs it in the icebox to cool down a bit* Thank you so much! I'm truly glad you enjoyed it.

Especially glad you found it hot, since your J/W buttsecks was so... er... inspiring to me. *g* I'm really happy you thought it was in character. I was a bit doubtful about my ability to pull off in-character bondage sex in a Bertie voice, honestly!

And major bonus points for catching the Bronte reference (though I was going for Jane Eyre instead of Wuthering Heights - honestly, I don't remember Wuthering Heights very well - did that one have a looney female too?) But - did you catch my subtle Sesame Street reference? *g*

Glad you liked the bit about the belt! Oh, I'm a total bondage!fic whore too. Nice to know I'm not alone in that! :)

Thank you again for your lovely compliments! Much appreciated, darling! *worships you back*
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maxine_penborne on August 1st, 2006 02:43 am (UTC)
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Oh good Lord, That made me pant... *wipes fog off moniter screen* Brilliantly written and steamy as HELL. I can't wait to see more from you! ^.~
As for plotbunnies, just a thought... But i've always wanted to see Jeeves on the bottom... Just once. XD
Sky: [j&w] family portraitskyblue_reverie on August 1st, 2006 02:56 am (UTC)
Hee! Sorry about the monitor, old thing! Thank you so much for the kind words. Especially glad you liked the smut. And, y'know, our minds must run in parallel tracks, because just this morning I was wondering how a Jeeves on the bottom situation would come about. (Yes, this is the stuff I think about on my morning commute *g*) I'm not sure I could see him as a bottom in a bondage situation, but for straight smex, I think that could happen. So thanks for the bunny - I may just take you up on it!
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groupieguppiegroupieguppie on August 1st, 2006 10:39 am (UTC)
Lovely, just like your first one
That was scorchingly hot, and I like the fact that the fic has plot as well as smut. You're one of the only writers who do NC-17 J/W fic, and so I salute you for it. It's refreshing to see someone take on that aspect of Jooster slash.

Is it an either/or kind of vote, or can I vote for both Jeeves's POV and a continuation with the belt? Please, do the belt story first if we've manage to convince you of the demand for both.
Skyskyblue_reverie on August 1st, 2006 01:52 pm (UTC)
Re: Lovely, just like your first one
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind comments. I love reading Wodesmut myself, and as you say, there's not enough, so I definitely wanted to include that aspect in my own writing.

You certainly may vote for both, although as I've said above, I really am not sure of my ability to do the belt!fic justice. I actually hadn't planned on going there - I was either going to do a Jeeves POV on this one next, or just move on to something totally different. But since so many people want to see the belt!fic I may give it a whirl. No promises though - have to see if the muse is willing to go there. :)

Thanks again for reading (both stories) and commenting - much appreciated!
karaokegal: wagnerkaraokegal on August 1st, 2006 02:58 pm (UTC)
Allow me to join the teeming throng throwing themselves at your feet with obsequious adoration. The brilliance with which you completely inhabits Wodehouse's world and voices is gutwrenching and the smut itself is ...words fail me...
I love both your Jeeves and Bertie POV's. Count me in with those who will probably explode in frustration if it doesn't happen will be undyingly grateful, if you proceed to the belt!fic. If I may make so bold as to suggest, perhaps at the point when the belt makes its appearance and Bertie suggests possible uses other than to hold up his trousers, that Jeeves could flash back to the the tie incident, so that we get his POV on that part, and then can move on to the belt without the need to recap the entire plot of the previous story.

Given Bertie's time and place and class, I'm assuming (haven't read all the stories so I'm guessing here) that he attended the kind of public (British usage) school where paddling was not completely unknown. Not sure how that plays into future kinky (and allow me a separate genuflection for your bondage kink) goings on.

Simply put, you are a goddess and I worship you.
Skyskyblue_reverie on August 1st, 2006 05:41 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you so much! You have no idea how much your kind words mean. And hee! I reduced a wonderful writer to "words fail me"! *is inordinately proud* As to the belt!fic, the bunnies started biting this morning, and what I have planned is similar to what you have suggested (though not as a flashback) in that I was going to do a Jeeves POV, picking up with Bertie and Jeeves getting back to the flat, going through the bondage smut, and then continuing on to the belt smut, perhaps with a plot thrown in, or perhaps not. Plus, someone upthread asked for Jeeves on the bottom (i.e. catching rather than pitching, not Jeeves on the bottom in re bondage), so I may try to work that in as well. I've seen in the House fandom where Wilson gets House tied up and then basically impales himself on House, which was pretty hot, so I may try out that scenario. That way everyone gets their wish in one fic! :) Anyway, we'll see if it pans out that way, because these things tend to acquire a mind of their own when I actually start writing.

As to paddling at school, yes, your instinct is right on. In one of the books (Jeeves in the Offing) Bertie specifically says that he and a friend bonded (heh) because they were often called up together before the headmaster to get walloped. (It’s in the very first paragraph, in fact.) And as to J/W bondage kink, I’m really surprised and kind of happy/relieved that so many others seem to share it! I was kind of worried that when I posted a bondage J/W fic, people would turn up their noses and be like “heresy!”, so I’m really glad that hasn’t happened. –phew– *wipes brow*

Awww, thank you, but please, there's no need for worship! *blushes* I am quite an admirer of your fic as well.

Thanks again for reading and for your lovely comments!
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Kelly Holdenkelly_holden on August 2nd, 2006 02:28 pm (UTC)
I know everybody else has said so, but it's amazing how you manage to make such utter filth sound so Wodehousian.

Jolly good show, what.
Skyskyblue_reverie on August 2nd, 2006 03:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you, m'dear! Wodehousian "utter filth," high praise indeed! I'm glad you enjoyed. :)
conductrixvitaeconductrixvitae on August 2nd, 2006 03:26 pm (UTC)
I have no words. I'm still a tad breathless. Brilliant, brilliant. I tip my hat to you.

Oh and More! More I tell ya! More Now!
Skyskyblue_reverie on August 2nd, 2006 05:38 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. And, yes, I'm hard at work on a sequel already - my Jeeves-muse kicked my ass out of bed at 6:30 am (!) yesterday to start work on it. :)
Tera Daisy Spawn / Beth McMillanspawnsfix on August 2nd, 2006 09:53 pm (UTC)
If someone had asked me if I thought it was possible to write BDSM in Bertie Wooster's voice, I would have roundly berated them for being crazy.

Now what'd you have to go and prove me wrong for?

This. Killed. Me.

Skyskyblue_reverie on August 2nd, 2006 10:08 pm (UTC)
Oh, sorry I killed you, m'dear! *revives you* I'm glad that you enjoyed, though. *g* Thank you so much for reading & commenting! Oh, and by the way, how do you do those cute little heart thingies? I'm still stuck using the <3 b/c I'm clueless like that. :)
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The Mellifluous Leaper 182: Jeeves & Woosterleaper182 on August 3rd, 2006 12:52 am (UTC)
OMG, I LUV YOUUUU.

Fangirlish reaction set aside -- no, wait, there's more coming.

I love that you were brave enough to venture where other authors fear to tread, but in terms of going into NC-17 territory as well as exploring kinks. Of *course* Bertie would trust him, and it's lovely to see Jeeves losing control, but only using a few sentences to describe it. Brevity is love.

That said, WHEEEEEEEEE!

*adds to memories*
*prints fic and cuddles it*
*re-reads most happily*
Skyskyblue_reverie on August 3rd, 2006 01:19 am (UTC)
Wheeee, Leaper Love! *loves you back* I was hoping you'd pop by and comment, old egg. Thank you so much for the compliment about bravery - I was pretty nervous to go into this territory, and I'm even more terrified to see where I'm going next, in terms of a sequel. We'll see if it works out or not. But, yes, I do think that it's plausible that they'd have this aspect to their relationship. The power dynamics between the two of them are so interesting.

And, yay for memories! Yay for printing & cuddling! Yay for re-reading! :) I'm so glad you liked it.

Thanks again for reading and commenting, m'dear!
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Zanesmokingthings on August 3rd, 2006 08:06 am (UTC)
I say! I am enjoying this more and more - of course one enjoys first-times, but there's nothing like a good established relationship, and J/W lends itself to that so well. This was very well done - you've got the Jeeves voice, which is very hard, and now the Bertie voice as well.

Do write more!
Skyskyblue_reverie on August 3rd, 2006 03:07 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad you like both of the pieces! First-times are one of my personal Favorite Things, so I definitely wanted to write one. I made about two pages of notes on things that I wanted to see (Jeeves figuring out his feelings first and having to guide Bertie there, the relationship taking a long time to develop, etc.) and things that I did not want to see (e.g. any discussion about whether Jeeves should start calling Bertie by his first name, because in my world, just... no).

But, yes, you're totally right, these two really lend themselves to established relationship. And now that I've kind of said all the things I thought were important about how I think those two would come together, I really am not sure what more I could add in terms of a first-time fic. I imagine that the first-time inspiration will strike again one day (it might be fun to do one from Bertie's POV), but for now I'm more feeling the established-relationship bunnies.

And, yes, I am planning to write more, so thank you for the encouragement! :)
(Anonymous) on August 4th, 2006 06:39 am (UTC)
Wow. What everyone else said... I can't phrase it any better. You're good.
Sky: [j&w] tie heartsskyblue_reverie on August 4th, 2006 06:51 am (UTC)
Thank you so much, whoever-you-are! :) And wow, if I got lurker-love, that is a high compliment indeed. :)
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Skyskyblue_reverie on August 4th, 2006 03:22 pm (UTC)
Yay! Thank you so much, dearheart! I was really going for funny and hot at the same time, but you're the first to mention it, so I'm thrilled that that came across to you. Just reading your fic and talking to you is a big help, not to mention the lovely recs. (Oh, and because I'm a huge dork about these things, I was totally excited that your fb pushed the comments into two pages. *g*)

*peers closely at icon* Is that ASH? With a rose - for me? *melts*
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Earth-Bound Misfit: QIsmithy161 on August 4th, 2006 09:53 pm (UTC)
Okay, you absolutely win at life, the internet and everything. This is the best fic ever. No one need ever write in fandom again. You've nailed it.
Best line? Well there were lots, but this one particularly tickled me
"I fancy that you're a bit overdressed for this occasion, and I insist that you remedy the situation at once"
Awesome.
Sky: [j&w] tie heartsskyblue_reverie on August 4th, 2006 11:39 pm (UTC)
*faints*

Oh my goodness, thank you, thank you, thank you for such incredibly kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much. Hee, happy you liked that line. Jeeves was rather overdressed, wasn't he? Okay, I think Jeeves is overdressed anytime he's not completely naked. :p

Thank you again so much!

Antony: (spacemonkeyluvn) shareshikala_uzuki on August 5th, 2006 05:32 am (UTC)
You are full of brilliance. It's authors like you that give the credibility (and sanity) back to the fandom, and make it worth wading through the cesspool of crap (in very broad terms of the writing) to come across something as absolutely brilliant as this. It's geniuses like you that make people remember why fics were ever cool in the first place. To me, your writing is the epitome of what it's all about. Taking a universe you adore, making it your own, and sharing creatively.
Plus, the BEST SLASH EVER. OMG, you write romance SO WELL. I was dying all over the place right with Bertie.
I am amazed at your characterization. Good gods, you write them PERFECTLY. These two have just become my favorite fics of all time. I'm serious; well done, and I BEG you to keep writing.
Skyskyblue_reverie on August 5th, 2006 07:40 am (UTC)
Oh my goodness, if the last comment made me faint, this one killed me DED. *dies and is dead liekwoah*

Thank you so much for such kind words. Really, you cannot imagine the huge grin on my face right now. It's been so amazing to me how supportive and enthusiastic people in this fandom are, and I love you all for it!

I do adore this universe, and I utterly adore these characters and everything about them. If I can share the love, and bring others into my little J/W world, that is the best thing I can imagine.

Thank you so much for saying you liked the romance. I'm all in favor of the hot smex, but really, it's about the love and tenderness more than the purely physical for these two, so I'm glad that came across so strongly to you.

Favorite fics of all time? Oh my gosh, darling, you are going to turn my head. (And peeking at your journal, you make gorgeous Frycons and listen to Tom Lehrer! How cool are you?)

In closing, thank you for such delicious, delicious commentude and I'm so thrilled that you liked them so. I certainly hope that my next endeavor shall meet with your approval.



p.s. pianoiconlove!
Gaffsiegaffsie on August 7th, 2006 04:19 pm (UTC)
Wonderful! And here I thought it couldn't get any better than your previous offering. :) Bondage and Jooster fits together like hand in glove. The side-story with Stiffy and Aunt agatha was lovely too, but nothing beat the sex. It was so in character (which is hard to achieve with these two particular gentlemen), so tender, so *hot*. The way Jeeves reacted to Bertie tied down and helpless, and the way Bertie responded to Jeeves every touch... Excuse me while I go take a cold shower. :D
Skyskyblue_reverie on August 7th, 2006 05:06 pm (UTC)
Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed and that you think J/W bondage is plausible. I'm going to go even further with it in the sequel... *evilgrin*

The way Jeeves reacted to Bertie tied down and helpless, and the way Bertie responded to Jeeves every touch

I hope you won't mind my saying that you have just put your finger exactly on something that I was really trying to get across in my fics, and I'm so glad that you see it too. To me, Jeeves is cerebral. He gets stimulation and pleasure out of the physical act of sex, of course, but mostly he is turned on by thoughts. The image of Bertie tied up, the vision and idea of him helpless and writhing - those are the things that would really get Jeeves going. Whereas Bertie is much more physical - so he focuses more on the actual sensation of touch, of what Jeeves is doing to him.

Anyway, hee, glad I got you hot under the collar! Thank you so much for commenting, I really appreciate it.
out_there on August 31st, 2006 11:17 am (UTC)
*fans self*

Oh my god. I mean...

Whoa.

I knew the idea of Jeeves/Wooster was sweet and hot, I just never expected it could be *that* hot.
Sky: [j&w] pyjamasskyblue_reverie on August 31st, 2006 02:59 pm (UTC)
Hee, thank you! So happy that you found it hot! 'Course, wait'll you read the next one (if you're not scared off by the kink warning, that is *g*).

Thanks for reading & commenting, old thing!